i realy don't know why it's taken me so long to find this. i ought to keep a better eye on fandom, because this is awesome, plotty, multi-chapter, perfect characterisation/dialogue love.

commenting on this chapter rather than in any sane place because i've read this much in one go and now i need to sleep so i can read the rest without everything going blurry (as it is kind of is at the moment).

really just loving everything at the moment, but particularly the characterisations which are brilliant. at this stage the gap between chapters is a bit of a disconnected lurch, but i don't really care as what follows is pure brilliance. in this chapter (since i'm commenting specifically on this chapter) i particularly like - the reference to harriet jones's government and the doctor's thoughtlessness, the un-safeness of the picnic, the biscuit cupboard raiding (or lack of) and arthur dent. i think that was this chapter anyway. i really am rather tired, so i apologise for the rubbishness of this comment. i'll be back tomorrow in a (hopefully) more lucid form.