Oh, very nice. I especially like the bit about him lying about his age, and this part:
River is the second woman he’s kissed in this body and she’s not like Amy at all; Amy, with all her passion and energy and enthusiasm is adventure and youth. River is different; River’s kiss, he thinks, is sadness.
And the last line nearly killed me (in a good way).
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Date: 2010-05-19 04:21 am (UTC)River is the second woman he’s kissed in this body and she’s not like Amy at all; Amy, with all her passion and energy and enthusiasm is adventure and youth. River is different; River’s kiss, he thinks, is sadness.
And the last line nearly killed me (in a good way).